it was a little confusing how u changed charecters u might wanna put something there to warn ppl lol
but otherwaise really really good (:

Wahah. xDD I kinda laughed. x] Chad is all "badass", but he is the one being fucked. ._.; I dunno. xD I just like it when the roles are completely reversed. :DD >ww

I thought this was one of the best Yaoi lemons i've ever read. Seriously. And i read a lot of them.

Love!

Whoa...you lost me for a second with the sudden point of view switch there. Maybe add in a page break or something? Other than that, it was good. I thought Liam's reaction was a bit odd, but understandable.

teehee...sweet.

wow! this was a totally great story! too bad its a one shot...but it was still reelly good!