aw that was so sweet ^_^ i lurve foxes

i loved it alot! You should write more, like make it into a novel! I really enjoyed it and i give it a nine out of ten, just because i want more! haha good job.
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~El Noellio~

You're a good writer. And it reads well.

Some more details would have been nice. Like more about Lucia, who she is, why she is shunned. You sort of mention it, but more details of her life, family, whatever would be nice.

Also, if she isn't at the mating cermony, how can she see/know what is happening? Also the transition between some scenes is a little confusing. Unsure if any time has passed at all, or if it's happening immediately after the action before it.

Aww that's sweet. The Prince seems like a nice foxy ^_^

Shanima -x-