Nice story, and no, i am not just saying that.

Its an awesome story!I like it.^_^

That's was so sweet; i really enjoyed it, made me smile... lol

Lips

Oh, such a great story! You make awesome shounen ai fictions! I like how Ray goes 'humph'

Yay! nice story... very feel-good at the end. I like how you showed Ray's gradual metamorphosis, how Ceyo gradually drew him out of his shell. nice descriptions, and i like the way you showed how some families are polar opposites.
Good work, keep writing!!
Janna

That was a really cute story^_^

Thanks for the reviews on my story and for pointing out the mistake I made in the end of my last story (It was so long ago that you reviewed me I don't know if you remember -_-)

Anyway you're a good writer as well ^_^ Do you really reckon that Ray is like Reiji?

It's really cute. God, this makes me wish I went to a co-ed school!

Ray's a badass, Ceyo's a nerd. Odd combination is an understatment. Cute though. Despite it's shounen-ai, I thouroughly liked this story and it was a fantastic story to read. :P Great work. Rock on Derek! And rock on for more to come! (celebrates) AH, YEY!

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AH! Mr. Farquharson! I'm ashamed. The thought of two GUYS kissing is...well, odd. (Ive seen it enough times though so I ain't bothered) This is great, you got style, you got talent, you got creativity beyond measure. A great read, fast paced and down right kickass!

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Dude, three words.

YOU

ARE

AMAZING

"Enough said"

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OMFG! CLIMAX ALERT!

I just thoughta something. Is Ceyo gay? Bloodyblimey slugs and slime! This is some awesome story you got here. AH!

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Hilarious!

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Ooh, this Animal likes! That wsn't meant to sound wrong either. Aye, diddlysquat, this is kicking some yaoi **!

I like Ray, he's got an attitude issue!

(do I HAVE to review each chapter?)

"Yes Joe, or I will KILL you."

(cowers) OK, will do, man!

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