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| ThePontificator 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseNice story, and no, i am not just saying that. |
| DreamlessNights529 2008-03-28 ch 10, | abuseIts an awesome story!I like it.^_^ |
| FreeFallHeadFirstOffARoof 2007-06-15 ch 10, | abuseThat's was so sweet; i really enjoyed it, made me smile... lol Lips |
| Kidiu Anaji 2007-06-07 ch 10, | abuseOh, such a great story! You make awesome shounen ai fictions! I like how Ray goes 'humph' |
| angel-Janna 2007-03-22 ch 10, | abuseYay! nice story... very feel-good at the end. I like how you showed Ray's gradual metamorphosis, how Ceyo gradually drew him out of his shell. nice descriptions, and i like the way you showed how some families are polar opposites. Good work, keep writing!! Janna |
| Namida no Hurricane 2006-11-10 ch 10, | abuseThat was a really cute story^_^ Thanks for the reviews on my story and for pointing out the mistake I made in the end of my last story (It was so long ago that you reviewed me I don't know if you remember -_-) Anyway you're a good writer as well ^_^ Do you really reckon that Ray is like Reiji? |
| Cardi 2006-09-09 ch 10, | abuseIt's really cute. God, this makes me wish I went to a co-ed school! |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 10, | abuseRay's a badass, Ceyo's a nerd. Odd combination is an understatment. Cute though. Despite it's shounen-ai, I thouroughly liked this story and it was a fantastic story to read. :P Great work. Rock on Derek! And rock on for more to come! (celebrates) AH, YEY! -:¦:--:¦:- Joe -:¦:--:¦:- |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 9, | abuseAH! Mr. Farquharson! I'm ashamed. The thought of two GUYS kissing is...well, odd. (Ive seen it enough times though so I ain't bothered) This is great, you got style, you got talent, you got creativity beyond measure. A great read, fast paced and down right kickass! -:¦:--:¦:- Joe -:¦:--:¦:- |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 8, | abuseDude, three words. YOU ARE AMAZING "Enough said" -:¦:--:¦:- Joe -:¦:--:¦:- |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 7, | abuseOMFG! CLIMAX ALERT! |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 6, | abuseI just thoughta something. Is Ceyo gay? Bloodyblimey slugs and slime! This is some awesome story you got here. AH! -:¦:--:¦:- Joe -:¦:--:¦:- |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 5, | abuseHilarious! -:¦:--:¦:- Joe -:¦:--:¦:- |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 4, | abuseOoh, this Animal likes! That wsn't meant to sound wrong either. Aye, diddlysquat, this is kicking some yaoi **! |
| Do Not Feed this Animal 2006-08-29 ch 3, | abuseI like Ray, he's got an attitude issue! (do I HAVE to review each chapter?) "Yes Joe, or I will KILL you." (cowers) OK, will do, man! -:¦:--:¦:- Joe -:¦:--:¦:- |