| Reviews for Newton's Third |
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Soulshifter 10/20/06 . chapter 1I like this, I once wrote a Haiku about The Newton laws, in fact, one for each. |
boys kiss girls 8/28/06 . chapter 1This was excellent. I love the first four lines. You are a writer of many talents. |
just dani 7/3/06 . chapter 1oo i like this a lot. the title is clever and perfect for this! keep writing |
The Fourth Fate 6/27/06 . chapter 1Aww. I love this. And the title is cute. This whole piece is just so... lovable. It gives you a warm fuzzy feeling inside, you know? I love the part "I tell you it's wrong/and you ask me what's right." It's such a funny contrast. I love people who kind of round us off a bit, kind of complete us. Haha that sounds so corny. But yeah, I think everyone has someone who kind of equals them out. Wow. I am being SO repeptitive. Haha. Anyway, great job. I love this. |
InkandIntrospection 6/27/06 . chapter 1I enjoyed the comparison of this piece to Newton's Third Law. Very effective and it definitley caught my attention. |