yo, hey, sorry it took so long to review, but i was preocupied, and when i finaly read it, the gay thing wouldnt let me review it...so heres the review:

i think it is a great start, and u should really continue

this is really good please continue.

Oh my goodness... Jessa faerie, you're one foxy girl! The story was real cute, especially 'cause you know that I have a weakness and certainly a sucker for romance... :) Good, great, excellent start!

I wonder where this kiss will take them next... :)

P.S. Just how good is Niamh in kissing? Mind if I try a go... Hahahhaa

[[giggles]] Its cute I like it. Keep going. please.

I think this is a really good start. please update soon.