Beaut... it's got a great rhythm, nice flow to it, great poem all up... it's nice. Pretty. Just.. yeah!!

Very nicely, whimsically written...a good variety of imagery and a smooth, flowing rhythm. I really, really like the second-last line as well :)

If I were to hazard making a line suggestion, I would suggest taking out "the Greater" and adding "-y" to "glass" in one of the later lines. That would make it a little more streamlined, while keeping the alliteration relatively intact. Unless you didn't want to refer to God specifically, and that's okay too.

Anyways, a good read :)