FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| knight 2006-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse=D my name is changeing alot. lolz. very good poem. my faveorite of all. |
| michael 2006-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abusegood but needs some work on the grammar.=p |
| Dave Lee 2006-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseI love the twist towards the end...I didn't expect that. Other than a few spelling quirks a little proofreading can't fix, a well-written, fun little poem! :) |