Imagery is beautiful. I can feel the numb ache in my bones.

The last line kills.

I hate it, too.

Love how realistic it is. Probably cause it's real.

the heart ache in these words...really a moving and powerful piece. strong images.

"it was such a sweet collaspe" the collaspe itself is described so vividly..the pain seems to scorch through it...amazed.

well written. moving, and...sad.

very thought provoking

This is beautiful. The imagery is stunning. I can see everything so clearly throughout. It's as if I'm watching a film. Wonderful. Keep writing! :)

Whoa. Intense. Everything's so visual in this! Makes the poem strong. Keep writing! :)

This is the best of the series I think...it's full of melancholy, not even cliché, and once again the last line is awesome. You finish off your poems amazingly!

I love the last line...I like how you describe the carpet and the ceiling, it shows how mind-numbing the situation is...and the last line of course, rocks.

Ouch. Sad...you did a great job showing it was a phone conversation...*wince* it really is a 'what could I say' situation...sorry..

My favourite book. If there is no love, why the hell would there be heartache? Why would there be pain if there wasn't pleasure? Would dark exist if we didn't have light to compare it to? I know this sounds corny, but it really was a spur of the moment reflexion...think about it.

Wow. I read this and I am seriously freaked out, because something almost identical happened with some people I know. That is so weird how your life is so similar to theirs. Wow. Keep writing! :)

the imagery of this made it play like a movie in my mind. your titles are lovely, I have a thing for titles. but, in short, amazing. and I am sorry.