I checked out this one like you said to, I will check out the other in a min.

Its ok.

P.S.Thanks for reviewing the first one, or older, its nice when people do that, you don't always have to check the latest thing, doesn't mean its better if its first on the list. Let your pain on fire well thats metaphorical for well all the pain you caused to me is now inflicted on you, at least I am pretty sure, I don't always remember, but it was a misinterpration I occured upon and it fit perfectly.

The piece was pretty good. Becuase you don't incorperate (sp?) punctuation throughout the stanzas / poetic clauses, it's sometimes hard to work out. I like that, though, becuase it gives room for interpretation. For example, "In the shadows of the Great American" could be its own statemnet while "Whasteland One can hear piano..." etc. I like that. But I just want to say:

Condensation, once language,

gathers on the looking

glass.

Is a BEAUTIFUL statement. Props for living and writing that. I'd suggest making that its own poem. Wow.