Oh I see what you meant, the ones unfused, sorry for that confusion, anyway better than fused I think. Applies for both of them.

Wow. It's weird, you know. Reading this, I didn't really like it, but when I finished, I thought to myself, "What a great poem". The imagery and word choice make the concept work. Great job.

Good job! I like the imagery you used! Keep writing!

Very surreal. I love it.

Ooh, it's definitely not what I thought from reading the summary. At first, I didn't like it. But that drew me in - it was excited and I wanted it to be good. You captivate the reader's attention and definitely clinch at the end. Great work.