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| norg 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abusea lot of stigma attached and it can be felt throughout the poem. it is very well sturctured and i like the sue of the language; out of curisoty why did you split up the word "trail" and why only one line with "nothing" on it? |
| Alsana Orchid 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseVery true. |