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May Elizabeth 2009-04-19 . chapter 1
I liked this. I would love this to be read at my wake when I pass on. Brightest blessings.
life like whoa 2007-07-15 . chapter 1
beautiful.
I just recently lost a friend,
and when I read this it made me
think of her.

I kind of pictured her saying this to me,
almost in a dream like setting.

it was almost a bit of closure.
thank you for writing this.
it was very touching.
DemonicDestiny 2006-11-27 . chapter 1
Aww. That's such a sweet and beautiful poem. Great piece of writing! =)
Wolf of Asguard 2006-07-03 . chapter 1
A truly moving poem from a talented mind.

I would love to hear from you sometime as i love discussing matters witchy, May your broomstick never splinter lol,

Blessed Be.
WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY 2006-06-30 . chapter 1
That's so sweet, like something you might read at a pagan death rites service.

Going on my favourites!
The Postscript 2006-06-28 . chapter 1
Great beginning. The images are exquisite and fresh. Keep writing, s.
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