Ah, sweet simplicity...So few words, yet so beautiful! Nicely done.

I like this poem, and I love the format. I might use it sometime, if you don't mind :) I think the best part about it is you don't have to worry about syllables!

Keep writing!

This has very good description (i like 'ardent') and the delicatness of her 'satin heart' gets through very well.

luv, Sa

Ouch. This poem caused me physical pain. But in a good way. You've used your words perfectly to depict an organ so delicate that even the lightest touch can tear it to the point of bleeding. Then, of course, you tie this delicateness into the simile of emotion. The whole poem is a success. Nice job.