i love this piece tobits. it's absolutely stunning and original, the last line was beautiful.

favs. =)

ohh the personification is really quite lovely. rain is passionate.

lol. love the name ^^ this poem painted a lovely picture.

can't wait to read more!!

This is really quite an excellent poem. The imagry is amazing and it is obvious you have a great way with words. The only thing in this story I would change is taking out the "not what you think" in the summary, as that sort of ruins the ending. However, I really enjoyed the surprise ending. Keep up the great work and I look foward to reading more poems by you in the future!

Beautiful. Wonderful diction, outstanding images. I don’t know what else to say. Keep writing!