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PatsPrincess12 2008-09-06 ch 51,	abusegod! i absolutely LOVED this story!! i was a fan of shawn white and so i was excited this story was about him!! i loved it so much! i would stay up late just reading it!! lol! it took me awhile to finish because of school and all but i was always thinking about what would happen next! lol! i hated it when bobby left!! an i almost cried with all the sad stuff that happened. i never did like brian so i was glad when he was gone. i knew when she left they would have to get back together some how because the were like destined to be together!! thanks for writing! I'm going to read more of your stories!!
anonymous 2008-08-21 ch 51, anon.	abuseLOVED IT! I especially liked the use of the songs as the chapter titles and within the story. Very creative.
Vivian Hyde 2008-08-15 ch 21,	abuse“Fine. You want a good reason why he’s not good enough for you?! Because he’s not me!” I love both of their reactions. This is by far, my favorite chapter.
euphoria-falls 2008-08-12 ch 15,	abuseisn't that a shania twain song?? =]Em
Obsession Changes Things 2008-08-10 ch 51,	abuseHey, There really isn't much that I can really say about this story except for that it was GREAT! I fell in love with it from the start and I couldn't stop, it was funny and dramatic and it had its ups and downs, and it was done beautifuly. Well done your writting is amaizing. It was a perfect romance. Completley obsessed: ~Obsession
henred5 2008-08-10 ch 2,	abuseAored (adored times 20 mill) the end conveyor belts bit. Perfect stuff.
henred5 2008-08-10 ch 1,	abuseI LOVED it! Especially how it began and how the characters kept making references/talking about Bobby's list. Fantastic!
volleychick89 2008-08-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseI know that this story is complete but i saw the lyrics at the bottom of this chapter and that sparked this review. That song is so much fun! lol, um, the story looks good too :p
geminibaby6789 2008-06-15 ch 51,	abuseThanks for the story! I love it! :)
not-what-you-think 2008-05-22 ch 28,	abuseHey! I really like your story so far! I'm not finished with it yet, but I thought I would let you know that I was reading it, because personally, I hate it when people read my stuff and don't tell me. Well, I really like the story. It has cliche moments, but the whole situation is not. And I really like how it sounds so sweet. Whenever I read this I keep smiling at whatever Shaun does or Bobby. I could definitely see this story as a movie. I also love the characters and how Shaun's family treats Bobby. Thanks for letting us read your work. It's really amazing!
always&forever 2008-04-24 ch 51, anon.	abuseok so umm i loved this story, it was amazing. and to see a story with shaun white :).. so much better and yes you were right the music was amazing
Running Riot 2008-02-27 ch 18,	abuseyou may not read these reviews anymore but this chapter hit me like nothing i've read before. the song she sings at the party was amazing and had a deep affect on me. you see it was the song played at my aunts funeral a few years back and the main character of this story (bobby) reminds me a lot of her. thank you for this and i hope the rest of the story is just as good :D
claireponcherrii 2008-02-21 ch 1,	abuseOoh! This sounds really interesting!
Elizabeth07 2008-01-03 ch 51,	abuseWell, what can I say? I can say that your story is very well written, my only complaints would be like some of the other reviews, the lyrics are a nice touch, but, they somewhat lengthy at times, and I tended to get bored, and skimmed over them.. Well, anywho... I loved that you showed the character's lives over the years, that is what I have done for some of my stories I have on paper. Especially, when it is well done, which I'm saying yours is. I love the secondary characters, you made us love them as well, and I'm glad that you will write stories for them.. My other odd moment, was when I finished the story, and wandered what your title had to do with the story, when I first read the title, I thought it would be set in the mountains or something like that. It just threw me a bit, but, I kept reading, and kept an open mind. And, I am glad that I did, your story is very vivid, and made me laugh, and cry, and even I wanted to hit Brian for what he did to her, but, I kind of saw it coming when Bobby said that he drinks! I said to myself, uh oh, he is going to get violent. Maybe if you ever go back and re-write, you should put more warning signs that Brian is going to explode one day, instead of putting it down later, in hindsight, that is my opionion, of course.. I know this is a rather long review, but, I felt that you would like to hear the truth, and see my own point of view. I think as we grow as a writer, we can always see ways we can improve. I know I have improved alot, by other's opinions and input. Well, I loved this story, just to make sure that you know. I would read again, if it became published. Wonderful job!
Janae 2007-10-07 ch 50, anon.	abuseomg i just finished reading this story for the third time! you are an amazing writer! thank you for writing this amazing story! its so touching everytime i finish reading it i have to just sit back and think about it... once again you are an amazing writer! thank you so much..

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