Heh. Oh, yes, to resist the temptations sin has to offer. You've done such a nice job with this, with the personification of sin and with jsut everything in general. It's a cute piece. Keep writing! :)

ahaha, we know this don't we. we know this mocha-skinn'd minx. lovely casual portrayal.

this was really good! your descriptions were very well worded.

i found this story and read it because of the name. ^^ that's my name. Sin. lol (it's really Sinnakura but people call me Sin).

write on!!