Hallo! Just wanted to stop by and review! I read the first few chapters and wasn't really sure if I was going to like it. But I assure you that now I realize that i'm definitely hooked on Magelet's Vow. The plot and Alenta's journey is really starting to pick up and I like the way it's turning right now. I like how you tell the story so that the settings Alenta experience may change but at each one she still makes meaningful relationships with people even though she might not encounter them again. I also really appreciated how Alenta had to face the predicament of feeling like she betrayed her mother's people. Please update!

You're amazing. I wish you had posted sooner, because unfortunately Im starting to forget what happened earlier! (lord forbid.)
Lucky for new readers you have so many chapters up, they can go right through C:
I love that you're gotten so far, and theres still a plot. A climaxing, exciting plot may I add. Your writing never ceases to draw me in, its so creative and believable!

ps, Lieth is such a stud :P. I am in breathless anticipation for what is yet to transpire between them he;)

Very nice story so far. Hope you update soon. I feel bad for Alenta. Not her fault her dad was infidel.

- HT

WWAGGHH this is getting so intense! :O :O
I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm really loving how this is turning out :) I really hope nothing happens to _(nonames,trying not to give stuff away)!! I like him! :(
I really like the way you can create a colourful, imaginable setting, but not like with overwhelming paragraphs of imagery. I'm liking what I see :) Keep it up!!

You are doing a good job. How ever, only readers with tenacity to last through first 3 chapters will ever come this far. it's a bit slow... It develops in to quite interesting story after awhile. cool.

Ah 'm so excited for the next chapter. :D :D that was awesome. I can tel stuff is giong to happen soon and I really look forward to it! I love how the new characters and how theyre developing. heehee

more please! I love this story. :)

Very interesting...

I'm so happy you got another chapter up! Whoo so much excitement coming in, I got pretty giddy reading this :) I can really tell the story is starting to pick up.
and I want to hear more about Kamon. He sounds cool :)
Please hurry and get another chapter up! I can't wait to see what happens!
ps. You have the cutest charm to your stories, like the little random things that make me smile :) lol

Yay! an update! :D

I do hope she finds the crystal soon, I want her to be a battle mage! Update soon please, this story is great

Wow! that was great, I do hope she just steals the crystal and runs off with it, I miss Fane already :(

By the way, I totally *heart* the word magelet, it reminds me of a baby dragon (for no particular reason :)

Update soon!

Oh yay! An update! on to read it now :D

I love it! I'm relaly starting to notice a distinctive style in your writing. It's changed a lot (in a good way) and I'm amazed that you can think of so many creative and captivating ways to express feelings or create images! I'm envious.
I'm also loving how the story seems to be picking up, I actually yelled when I read one part rofl (Parents: what is she reading..)
Oh btw, I noticed you put up a preface! (i've been skimming chapters lol) Yes, it did help a lot, it really gives a taste of what's to come. keep it up!
I'm looking forward to moree

I am so drawn into this... it's amazing. I especially love the imagery and which words you pick, they just fit perfectly. I can't wait to finish this... but I'm going to try and only read a chapter once in a while so that I'm not too impatient waiting for an update!

Amazing... words can't describe this. I love it. :-)

hello hello! it was a great chapter! sorry i haven't read in a while, school has kept me away and various projects and distractions. ^.^