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| spiderKitty 2008-10-07 ch 23,  | abuseLOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT it was diffrent thats why i love it not many romance vampire storys on here have the vampire being killed so i love it and jaiden soun ds so cute!. i hope you do get this published its a fantastic story |
| spiderKitty 2008-10-05 ch 14, | abuseo busted |
| spiderKitty 2008-10-03 ch 3, | abuseyum im loving your story so far this jamison vamp is one hot mumma |
| spiderKitty 2008-10-03 ch 2, | abuseWOOAH JAMISON IS ONE HOT MOMMA |
| Piroko Hatake 2008-08-18 ch 23, | abuseI LOVE IT! IT'S SO REAL!! THE GOOD GUYS DON'T ALWAYS WIN IN REAL LIFE SO WHY SHOULD THEY IN STORIES!! I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks like that. Though I think you could probably destroy and rebuild Jaiden's life, no problem. In fact, I encourage you to. Thanks for bringing us such an incredible story! |
| AgamiMuffin 2008-08-15 ch 23, | abuseI honestly can't decide if I like it or not, it was really good but it was just suprising that Jamison died, and not in a good or bad way...it was just like...oh, he's dead...wasn't sad or anything. It also seemed a bit unresolved, like, okay queen? Where did that come from. And wouldn't it make sense that she'd at some point meet her mom or something? Especially if she's still alive and didn't go willingly. Seems unresolved, but otherwise it was a good story, well written and sweet. |
| AJ 2008-08-13 ch 23, anon. | abuseSo first off, I think this story is amazing.. Read it straight through, no stopping. I also must say that I appreciate the fact that it was a cliché happily ever after ending… makes the story stand out from all the rest. I am so impressed I am now going to start on other stories you’ve written! |
| akaCHEEKS 2008-08-08 ch 1, | abusejust adding to my fav's list. |
| lostlette 2008-07-28 ch 23, | abuseI love this story. |
| cheese was here 2008-07-26 ch 23, anon. | abusegreat story!! keep writing more. |
| oh y'know.that girl 2008-07-09 ch 23, | abuseWow..awesome story. I'm still kind of bummed about Jamison but I guess I can see how his death fits into the story. Anyway, nice job! :P |
| lisax0 2008-07-06 ch 23, | abuseamazing! |
| lilcatfish96 2008-06-29 ch 23, | abuseThis was one of the BEST vamp fics I've ever read. It kept me glued, freaking out on what was going to happen next! EXCELLENT WORK! Hope to read more of your works! |
| bITTer words 2008-06-23 ch 23, | abuseSo I finished it Its cool |
| bITTer words 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseokay so I read actually began reading this story a long time ago but stopped not because it was bad but because I stopped coming onto Fictionpress but I found this story again and decided to reread it..well I stopped at chapter 6 but it appears you have changed some things |