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Reviews For: Break Up

Basara
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuse...well, there is something to gain from a break up... well, it's not really that visible thou, I hope you could see it...

well, nice poem thou...

=)
lordelfy
2006-06-28
ch 1,
abuseAt first the narrator seems in a sense relieved that they won, but towards the end the hard truth of what happened hits them in the end. Or maybe i am just crazy? Am i anywhere close? NIce poem by the way!
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