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| Basara 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuse...well, there is something to gain from a break up... well, it's not really that visible thou, I hope you could see it... well, nice poem thou... =) |
| lordelfy 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseAt first the narrator seems in a sense relieved that they won, but towards the end the hard truth of what happened hits them in the end. Or maybe i am just crazy? Am i anywhere close? NIce poem by the way! |