Wow. Your pieces make me feel like such a girl! I get all wistful and stuff when I read them. I mean...I am a girl, but...anyway- this piece was just so beautiful. Again, your imagery is just amazing and the emotion is not flamboyant or in-your-face, it's laced through every word in this subtle "scent", if you will. It's wonderful.

-Smooches, Wizzy

Mm, I really like the rich feeling of this. Lovely and simple, very nice. It seems like a great memory. :)

it's good to remember.

I truly like your style, it's rugged and saturating, like the heat you describe.

You have a story-tellers heart.

Keep writing

Alan