That was brilliant...I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing, and by the way I love this poem because I've felt like this...so thanks.

The sound in this works marvelously to enhance the emotion. Like rapid fire grief and realization. Altering between tenderness and harsh honesty, this really encapsulates the ending of relationships, and the feelings that gush in the remembrance. Excellent flow, with a relatability that borders on universal. Great work.