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| Bloodflow 2007-06-23 ch 6,  | abusehehe, I didn't know it was a short story. In that case the length was perfect. |
| Bloodflow 2007-06-23 ch 7, | abuseSorry about not reviewing like I promised. I had to wipe my computer's memory a while back and I lost a lot of information. I could see parts of the story in my head as I read so you're description was excellent. The only thing that I think could of been better is the length of certain parts. Short story segments didn't give much depth. |
| Reaper 2006-09-19 ch 7, | abuseVery good but too short. However, it was still well written. ~Reaper |
| Sting Ferdinand 2006-08-25 ch 7, | abuseHm... quite suspenseful, and freaky. I like the last line of the story. Huh... supernatural military power... |
| Mr.Satire 2006-08-22 ch 7, | abuseThis was a pretty good thriller, but I like your current one more. It's a little more believable, but I did like this one. The ending kind of leaves room for a sequel, doesn't it? Great job, Bob. |
| Foxglove Nightshade 2006-07-15 ch 7, | abuseThis is a GREAT story...the chapters were a little too short, because I wanted more!! |
| JaveHarron 2006-07-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseInteresting read so far. The chapters are a bit short, and there's not a lot of detail in the prose (which would help when dealing with strange artifacts). Ever heard of the book "Decipher" by Stel Pavlou? There was a similar premise to ruins found under Anartica, but I won't spoil too much. |
| JaveHarron 2006-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseFor some reason, this story reminds me of one of my favorite horror movies of all time: John Carpenter's "The Thing." |
| Ben Wuest 2006-06-29 ch 2, | abuseWell, well! It seems that you've REALLY got something going for you! Is there going to be something scary at this ship, or something 'fantasy'-like? Gah, I guess I'll find out soon, yeah?I'm kinda taking it easy lately with Coran and the Time-keepers, you know? I haven't written anything in about a month... for his story, that is. Right now I'm working with a friend of mine here on fictionpress with a co-op on a separate account. Also, I just recently finished my third NOVEL, called "Rise of a Tower", but I don't ever put my big projects on fictionpress. Anyway, thanks again for the review, and do keep up the good work on this story, yeah? B. |
| Ben Wuest 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseWell, well, well, Mr. Bob, I'd have to say you've got a real project on your hands. While I still don't have a real idea of descriptions, I do grasp quite a pickle of plot. I shall read on, and thanks for the reviews, of course, B. |