i dont really know how to describe it;
sad, kind of. true. easy to relate to.
much like, as i've noticed, most of your poems.
and, like all of your poems that i've read, i really enjoyed it.
all your poems can be related to easily and that's what makes them wonderful.

great work!

Mk one thing :braking should be spelt breaking. = ) I liked this poem it reminds me of my poem Smile. Except this one is the complete opposite (my brain is being stupid and cant spell right now so i have no idea if i spelt that right..lol) In Smile the girl leaves him because she knows he is in pain being with her; in your poem they are out of love and stick with eachother becuase that is what they think they have to do. Yea but they are similar...heehee!

Aw! So cute, but at the same time, it's so sad. Keep writing.

This is really good and its easy to relate to. PS, thanks for the review.

Hey, thanks for the reviews...they really brightened my day in a rough patch.

Okay, your poem here - you might want to fix a few little spelling or usage errors, braking should be breaking for example.

This is a nice example of free verse with a flow. It isn't in developed poetry style, but it flows and it has your emotion and your thought and feelings in it. I hate it when people criticize (I can't spell) other people's emotional work. This is your work, and though this poem probably won't ever be found in a literature text book, it is still a peice of you.

I know how things go, how they can get rough sometimes, especially with boys (who you will learn all suck). If you'd like me to ever read over something for spelling/usage errors, or anything before posting, feel free to e-mail me and I'll get back to you.

You seem like you have a lot of potential. Don't be afraid to let your creative side out, ever.~Jennifer

Oh, how true is that poem. I think most of us knows how that feels at one point or another. I liked it, one error caught my eye tho, the 'braking' lines, should be 'breaking' but hey still get the point across^^

Thanks for the review btw.

And keep up the great work!

Is this written from your own experience? Its very different. I've begun to wonder if its possible to "Fall out of love" with someone... maybe? Maybe they just annoy you so bad you don't feel it anymore?