Brilliant, great analogy. Will have to read some more of your work.

Beautiful. And perfect, as far as I can tell. I loved it.

Nice work, keep writing... especially poetry with as much beauty emanating off every line as this.

~Dev~

"Ailed me until I paled"

Wonderful. I loved the choice of words. The comparison between the lilies and love was awesome, too. Simple, sad, and sweet. Although, it would have used if you made it a tad more longer. But all in all, the piece isn't marred in anyway. :) Good job, honey.

- Hannah :)

I loved how you worded this whole poem as this simple poem managed to create vivid images and emotions. Good work

Oh this piece was sad yet sweet! Couldn't help but get the feeling of unrequited love here and it was done really sensitively with beautiful images. Well done x

Hate to be a cliche reviewer but...this is great! yay! go you...I feel the erge to put this on my favorites. ^_^

And now I'll be more professional...

My favorite part was: "Love and lilies thrown so hastily..."

[The poor lilies! I wouldn't throw them away hastily. :( ]

.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.

This is so pretty in its simplicity. ^^ I absolutely love it. How you compared lilies to love, how they can both be thrown hastily. That was my favorite part.