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Reviews For: yanking the stars from the sky is a simple feat

dystynctlidotti
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful. Don't give yourself ** about having issues... happy people don't write the poems.
Unimportant
2006-06-29
ch 1,
abuseLovely. A very emotional poem, to say the least. My favorite line was: "truly i haven't stopped whispering your name with my eyes closed."

I only wish you would use more punctuation (periods, semicolons, ect.) and capitalize(I instead of i, ect.)--just so that it's easier to read and understand.

All in all, though, great job! Keep writing!
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