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| dystynctlidotti 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. Don't give yourself ** about having issues... happy people don't write the poems. |
| Unimportant 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseLovely. A very emotional poem, to say the least. My favorite line was: "truly i haven't stopped whispering your name with my eyes closed." I only wish you would use more punctuation (periods, semicolons, ect.) and capitalize(I instead of i, ect.)--just so that it's easier to read and understand. All in all, though, great job! Keep writing! |