love the story! Absolutely marvelous!

I loved this story so heart warming. I really liked how you focused on their eyes. After all they are the windows to the soul. Good Job!!

I don't get it, I thought that Taylor was "as close as siblings" with Joyce and they are cousins. Is this, like, incest?

naw. he got cutt!!

LOL

argh. overprotectiv broz are so not cool in real life..srsly..

OMG. he wudnt!

recently discovered..and i like =D

3 years too late as i've just discovered this now. but i liked it. :)

That was a really cute story!

OMG! that is so cute:))

carter is such a good brother. wish i have one.

anyway, i lavv the story:)

keep up!

I am so glad that neither of my brothers are as crazy protective as Carter. They've done enough damage as it is to my social life, even if it is funny to watch my girlfriends act completely ridiculous around them. Kudos for not swinging the Twincest way, too. My friends like to occasionally send them my way for a good laugh at my expense (being the better half of one of my brothers) so I'm actually grateful this one didn't start getting weird.

Excited to read the rest. Awesomeness.

I love this LOL I lovee cliché that seems werid comeing from from a tomboy but I love romance and this is at the top of my list. I love terri I really like her additide she won't put up with anyone or anything
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Read the entire story in...a few hours *doesn't bother counting* I have to say it was pretty good. Well, it IS good. Not often do I find a story on fictionpress that I'll stick to. Maybe I'm just naive in the whole romance genre, but I thought overall it was excellent. Taylor has to be my favorite character, although he has his fuzzy patches where it doesn't seem like he's going the way I thought he would, but that's what makes a story good, or this story.

Amazing Story.
Are yuu thinking about a sequal?