Reviews for Love and Perplexity

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BrownEyedBeauty 2007-06-19 ch 14,	abuseNice story. Sad ending though. Can't wait to read more :D
Calypso Silverhawk 2007-04-02 ch 14,	abuseI loved this part: "Kimmy looked to her right and saw a geek at a laptop sitting just out of security. “My manager will be giving out signed autographs right over there.” She said as she pointed to the geek. He looked around and pointed to himself questionably. Everyone ran over to him. Soon he had girls lunging at him. “It’s about time!” He said with a large grin. Kimmy took this opportunity to run towards the gate." Nice bit of somewhat-original humor there. :D (But who made up the stupid rule that having a laptop labeled you as a geek? D:)
cheimpo17 2007-03-29 ch 14,	abuseSorry I haven't reviewed. I've been a little worn out, but I'm back. Now for my review: Okay, with the way you ended this story, I need you to update the second book. Is it a continuation of this one? Hope you update soon and I will definitely check it out. If you are bored, I've started an actual story and am wondering if you wouldn't mind reading it.
Calypso Silverhawk 2007-03-21 ch 12,	abuseGood chapter. :3 One thing I might suggest for the future: Since this is a story that's I'm supposing is set in today's society, you might want to adjust the dialog as such. For instance...you've used slang here and there, but if you listen to how people talk everyday, slang and other incorrect grammar is used all the time. I think it would help readers really be able to relate to the people in this story if the characters talked like real people in today's society would(contractions are your friend!). :D Just a suggestion; you don't have to take me up on it.
cheimpo17 2007-02-08 ch 11,	abuseThis chapter is so sad. Loved it!
cheimpo17 2007-01-21 ch 9,	abuseDon't leave me hanging! I need more! LOL!! Anyway, thanks for your review and hope you girls update soon!!
IGNIS Elementi 2007-01-13 ch 9,	abuseWow this chapter was aawesome! It finally came! Ha ha ha ha ha! Kody's in for it now. Now he knows that he made a big mistake that cost a lot of people dearly. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon! :)
cheimpo17 2006-12-22 ch 8,	abusewow! short chapter, but glad you updated. hope you update soon.
IGNIS Elementi 2006-12-19 ch 8,	abuseUPDATE SOON W/ LONGER CHAPTERS!
Three Girls Same Ambition 2006-12-18 ch 1,	abuseEllie Marlue, if u read further you will realize why the scene of them dieing went so quickly...there is only so much you can say in a tv series when it's supposed to be acted as opposed to written...it came just as fast as it would if u were to watch it on a telivision..just think of it that way
EllieMarlue 2006-12-11 ch 1,	abuseYour story sounds interesting, but I think that the acting scene when Ian and Ashley drown went by extremely quickly. Kimmy seemed really flustered too. Keep up the good writing!
Calypso Silverhawk 2006-12-10 ch 7,	abuseJust thought I might review, since I hadn't (although I've read all the chapters). I think your grammer/punctuation's pretty good...the mistakes don't interfere with the storyline. Now, I'll try and be unbiased here, but I think this is starting to sound like a soap opera. I.e. what happens is starting to become predictable (which is something you don't want in a story). You may want it to sound like a soap opera or something, but that's just my opinion. Please don't take offense. >>;;
cheimpo17 2006-11-14 ch 7,	abuseHey, love this story. I was interested in this story when I read your bio about the three of you writing this together. Hope you update soon
Travis C. Eckert 2006-11-07 ch 1,	abuseGood chapter, irony too. I just read a poem on acting. Good job. Might wanna get more stuff up though.
IGNIS Elementi 2006-11-07 ch 7, anon.	abuseYou guys FINALLY updated. What took so long? Anyway. You guys have just put up two VERY HOOKING chaptaers, so now you'll have to UPDATE REGULARLY, or else...You never know what might happen... So great story and update SOON! :D

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