Oh, I can identify with this for sure..

It's completely me right now.

I really enjoyed reading this. The two major things in this story that I like so much were the style and just how real it was.

The style was probabaly my favorite aspect of this story. I enjoyed the crossover from first-person to second-person (at some points). It sort of fed into the realism of the story.

Great job on this.

i like where your going with this. keep up the good work.. i only hope that my story here on fictionpress will be as good as yours..

Deeply moving. You've really managed to capture life as many teenage girls view it.Thank you.