Pretty!

It flows very smoothly, though it took me a moment to figure out that "When had we to save it tried?" line. A bit confusing, that one. Took a moment to unravel, but other than that, a very excellent poem. I believe that perhaps a better way to phrase it might be something like, "When did we who would have saved it tried?". Just an idea to make it a little less confusing.

Another Lord of the Rings poem! Beautiful.