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| otakuprincess 2006-11-30 ch 1,  | abusePretty! |
| Troubled Flux 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseIt flows very smoothly, though it took me a moment to figure out that "When had we to save it tried?" line. A bit confusing, that one. Took a moment to unravel, but other than that, a very excellent poem. I believe that perhaps a better way to phrase it might be something like, "When did we who would have saved it tried?". Just an idea to make it a little less confusing. |
| Nehelia Silverlode 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAnother Lord of the Rings poem! Beautiful. |