Oh no...

Once again you leave me hanging!

This is a fun if freaky story! Lots of errors which will easily be sorted out if you get someone to edit for you.

Well written and well done!

Ok, so I like this story too. It's more real and less medieval. Me likes it. and wants more. No pressure, but this is one I would love to see continued.

Aww, how sad about Alexis being her only friend then ditching her for the popular people! Alexis didn't sound all that great anyway though . . .not too understanding. I love reading your work because each character has a little part of you in it. It's fun to find that part. :)And you aren't creepy, just to let you know. lol

O, creepy! This sounds really good! I like it as a first chapter, although it is somewhat confusing in the beginning. I wasn't really sure that her mom dying was part of the dream. But I got it after.

It was good I was able to grasp what was going on and get it to it. Sorry that this is short but I'm not sure what to say.