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| Wolf's Night 2007-01-19 ch 1,  | abusenice. really captures the feeling of not knowing who you are but still having someone there to guide you even when your afaid to hurt them in the process. I admit sometimes I'm afraid of myself (sometimes though its been a while since i've last scared myself that much :P) ~BloodHorse |
| Lady DreamWriter 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, You've captured the feeling of isolation and self hatred perfectly. The person in the poem is running away, blind to the fact that someone cares about her. You've don't a great job with this piece. |