Awesome twist...So wasn't expecting it. And I'm the one who's been obsessed with vampires lately...Great story, I really liked it.

omg! that was intense! I absolutley loved it! great job!

sweet as story! I hope you update it soon!!

Nice, very nice. That was very surprising, but very satisfying. I hated Michael halfway down the page, your characterization is amazing. Can't wait for more.

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'Buffet' seems a very vague word when used like this. Perhaps you'd like to use words pertaining specifically to food?

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You really need a lesson in word choice.