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this is so good(*.*)

Wow, this was a breath of fresh air in the writing world. It's been a long time since I've read something this emotional and well-written (of course, I expect no less from you ^_^)

This is a definite favorite of mine! But it fits into the type of stories that I love. Thank you again for the great read.

Finally got more time to read more.
Overall this chapter was pretty good. Still no action, but I liked that depth behind it. It's going fairly well and I wonder how the whole war thing will turn out.
Nice job.

An interesting idea for a story, though it moves a little too slow for my tastes (I suppose it's personal preferance, but I dislike it when things are unnecesarry stretched).
It is intriguing, but I hope to come across some action soon. I even notice that there are some similarities in our styles of writting (well, mostly in the style I wrote my "Dragon Blood" with), so that's always a plus hehe.
Overall it's a nice stry and I'll read the rest sometime in the near future.

P.S. Not sure if you're aware of it, but it seems to me someone ripped one of your stories (The Drifter). I noticed, seeing the publish date of both. If you'll check "just in" of manag section, you shouldn't have trouble finding it.

Awesome beginnig! I'm already hooked. I guess my friend cheeseraptor5 has good taste in short stories (he recommended it)

can't wait to read the rest!

Flashback, huh? Well, it was hard to understand what was going on, but I got most of it. It explains some things, if nothing else.

I've run out of things to say. I just like this. That's pretty much sums it up.

Another good chapter. I like how you don't just have random action, here. This feels like an actual story with plot development, instead of the random battles I've seen (and written) in the past. I felt a little confused at the fact that you seemed to switch from Hideo-Ni to Hideo-San, but it was the same person speaking. I don't know a thing about Japanese, so maybe you didn't make a mistake.

Anyway, good stuff.

Can't believe I forgot about this story. Good thing I glanced at my favorites list.

Anyway, this chapter was cool. I couldn't find anything wrong. The dialogue was good, and you moved the plot forward pretty well here.

DarkFox: ...

DarkFox: I hope Rei & Shugo are together in the end... T.T alive and happy of course X3 srry, don't mind me

Whoa! I'm hooked. You really should be writing for $. I am very intrigued and I really like your character's familiarity with one another. It's like you've known these characters for years!

First of all, I apologize for not reviewing every single chapter. I've been busy with college and all, but slowly and steadily I caught up! First of all... the story is simply breathtaking. Everything follows a seamless path, with very few disappointing bits (AKA: I just want more mindless action sometimes, depends on my mood! =P). Actually, for me the most disappointing bit was the finale. Really! You seemed to rush a bit, but it isn't a letdown in any way. But the positive points FAR SURPASS the cons (very little). This is as flawless as it gets here on FP, and everyone should read it. In fact, haven't you thought of publishing this? I bet it would be very successful!

From a seemingly simple story it evolves to a futuristic story, quite a drastic change there! It was emotional (especially the sex scene.. HAH!) and most of the fights were satisfying and exciting. In fact, I will tell you Gelinka (awesome name btw) vs. Rei is the most intense fight I've ever read in FP. The whole story slowly builds to THIS point. Awesome writing, and really Darket... this is your best. Try and get it published or something and I assure you I will be first in line to buy it! And again... sorry for not reviewing every chapter, but I think this sole review sums all the nearly 28 (yikes) chapters I didn't review. I am waiting for your next gem now =). Congrats on the over 250 reviews too!

Wow. That was one hell of a finale. Really wow...Too bad it had to end. I'll take a look at Drifter and friends after my exams, but for now I've to go study! See ya around then!