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| d 2006-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood storie, I like the satire of it, it is kind of a scary thought though dont you think. |
| Arise Amidst Ashes 2006-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseOh, I love this story.For the ending, I am a bit confused. When he said "I quit" in the end, does he want to achieve the same result as the "I quit" he said to Mr. Kidney? I love satires! ~Ash |
| An Inside Joke 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseEntertaining. I don't know how much I agree with it as I've never really dealt with medical expenses. Either way, though, I get the point of your satire. I don't like the ending much, though, as it seems to come out of nowhere. You establish that he doesn't like his job, but it also seems like this is just another ordinary day and nothing dramatic happened to cause a realization and make him quit. |