You call these joria? Intersting, did you make that up? I think of I've done one on accident before, but you do it in such a way that it's definitely got a purpose and rhythm to it.

This was really very good though it was only 16 words! Is it possible to have multiverse jorias? I'm actually quite curious. :) If it can only be 4 lines, then you certainly have a lot of discipline because I would always throw away the rules and write more than that. A very chilling emotional piece. I loved it!

Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thanks for the review on "Nature, My Sanctuary." I'm glad you found it to be serene as compared to several other fictionpress works. Hope to perhaps hear from you again!

Gives me shivers...

luv, Sa

from what I read of your poetry, I think this is the best so far! I love your way of limiting yourself to only four lines. have to try that myself sometime...