Interesting, yet different poem. But good job still. I love your work.

Sad, solemn and dark. nice job.

~the Stranger in the moonlight~

Short, dark and i sense a lot of emotion in these few words. Very nice^_^

The "RIP" just completes it, great poem!

like corpes (i think thats the name) this poem focuses upon one subject... its a good poem however i prefered corpes. keep up the good work!

keep writing

~Godly Luke Staden~

Creepy! Good piece! Write on!

~Anna~

Hmm... VERY short piece, but lovely just the same. I like the "RIP" at the end, suggesting that this would be written ON a tombstone. But it's a little dark. It's good to view death as something black and horrible. But then, it's healthy not to be afraid. Ah, hell. I'm scared to death of death.

Nice poem.

J

I like this. It may be short, but it's also lovely. Very nice.

This is another new one that didn't take to long to write, so I know it isn't that wonderful. I thought to share it for the people who wanted to read it. Yeah. Once again thanks to anyone who reads this.

HUGS & KISSES