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| Teddy Geiger 2006-11-15 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting, yet different poem. But good job still. I love your work. |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseSad, solemn and dark. nice job. ~the Stranger in the moonlight~ |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseShort, dark and i sense a lot of emotion in these few words. Very nice^_^ |
| classic violet 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThe "RIP" just completes it, great poem! |
| Godly Luke Staden 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuselike corpes (i think thats the name) this poem focuses upon one subject... its a good poem however i prefered corpes. keep up the good work! keep writing ~Godly Luke Staden~ |
| Princess-anna57 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseCreepy! Good piece! Write on! ~Anna~ |
| With Rhyme and Reason 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseHmm... VERY short piece, but lovely just the same. I like the "RIP" at the end, suggesting that this would be written ON a tombstone. But it's a little dark. It's good to view death as something black and horrible. But then, it's healthy not to be afraid. Ah, hell. I'm scared to death of death. Nice poem. J |
| hOpeinareddress 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It may be short, but it's also lovely. Very nice. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is another new one that didn't take to long to write, so I know it isn't that wonderful. I thought to share it for the people who wanted to read it. Yeah. Once again thanks to anyone who reads this. HUGS & KISSES |