Superb. Really. Not a single word wasted. The whole thing hits you the way a real piece of poetry should - like a punch in the guts.

Interesting.

... (if there was a computer icon that let you make a jaw-dropping smiley face, I'd use it right here) *jawdrop smiley face*

Wow. O.O That is deep, profound and thought provoking. Brilliant!

I loved it. Utter truth, too.

I like how the last work of each stanza is the beginning of the next- it ties it all together really well.

I can't quite pick out anyhing specific, but I think this is an excellent poem. Good Job!

~Monday

my god that was brilliant. I'm really not sure what to say...

I love how you brought it all back to standing on the edge... black and white... just amazing how you put it all together.

Brava.