woww. we're on a depressing streak aren't we? well, i like this one too. come to think of it, i love all your poetry.

very pretty poem, i love the last two lines the best. though it almost seems like you could finish it a little more...*

hm, i like this poem. i like the eccentricity of it, and how it's very (for lack of better word) dream-like. especially love the line "with porcelain oleander blossoms (impossible)". good job, keep writing.

arisu