loved it =]

Oh wow.

This story is definately amazing, I'm sure I'll be reading it again and again!

You do know that wikipedia is NOT a reliable resource, do you not? People can go in and change the words around, or type in something vulgar and unrelated to the topic the webpage you are on is supposed to be about. I suggest you change your source to a more reliable one.

Oh, that's my favorite dialouge from Alice In Wonderland! I love the Cheshire cat--he's my favorite! Great job with the story and awesome ending-- you wrapped everything up pretty nicely.

Kawaii. Loved it.
good job!

Aws =] I loved it all

Oh my god! This is turning out to be one of those stories that I didn't EXPECT to be all that great (not any fault of yours, I've just been flipping through random stories with no such luck), but it's turning out to be something no short of AMAZING! I LOVE IT! =]

YAY!
You fixed it!
You get cookies!
*dump truck dumps a full load of cookies on your poor head*
~Huggles from the clan of the strait-jacket!~

You truly are sadistic.
No cookies until you fix it!

...that's kinda creepy. Hm, well, I'm glad that the cat...um...the person that was a cat has appeared in this chapter. I'm interested in seeing what his and Yari's interactions will be like...haha.

Yay! You have a new reader! Well, it's only the first chapter, but I'm already loving it. All the Japanese stuffs is really interesting, but you could include more thoughts, like make your writing more personal towards your character--include their feelings and thoughts, etc. Alright, on to the next chapter!

Hey brilliant story so far and I love your discriptions of Kyoko's kimono's. Just one little thing I wanted to point out though. When Kyoko remind's Yari about his "date" with the girl and Nitanita is all scandalized, you said that Yari had forgotten all about his "randavuz". It's really spelled rendezvous... it's french...
I'm looking foreward to reading the rest though seeing as how you've finished it I suppose you won't see this... XD

This was really cute--and informative! I really like how you stuck to the things you learned and didn’t just pick and choose--which would have been fine had you not said you wanted it to be accurate. I really like this story, thank you for writing it!

me likey the story ^^

Oh wow this is such a great story.
I'm really happy I read it.