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Reviews For: Ashamed
no.peace.los.angeles 2006-08-01 . chapter 1
This is gorgeous. The flow is awesome, and the last two lines of the second stanza actually made me stop and say, wow. I love that image. Keep writing! :)
Cicy Chan 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
bitter words that just blend together so well! i especially like "another day/I'll make you mine"...
Dark-Night-Tigress 2006-07-01 . chapter 1
OMFG-wow. (period.) that was crazy/beautiful. I love it, really. keep it up!
Aslan Israel 2006-07-01 . chapter 1
Someone so broken... so sad.
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