i felt the same way how come all of the good people have to die but all the bad people never die

i love the point ur trying to make here! wonderful

The line breaks are great and the last two lines are powerful. I'd like to see a little more allusion, a little more imagery in what you write... the bones are all good.

Sad...i like this. Good job.

this is really good, and so true! well done *thumbs up*

Aw, sad. But very nicely put and written. I can really relate. Awesome work! Keep writing. :)

good job! I like this one! Love the theme. but is there not suppose to be a period at the end?~Liz