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| Aslan Israel 2006-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseYou make 'darling' sound so ... evil. but so delicious at the same time. Very nice! |
| rust phoenix 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful poem, you put a lot of emotion into it. I really liked the rhythrm you used. The stanza and the last two verses were especially haunting. |
| hye 2006-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuse...whatever happened 2 ur happy poems? the happy poems you used to write! T_T well it's good...but i love diana happy too! ~hye |
| darknessblooms 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseVery nice...although the rhyme was a little rough in a couple of parts. I love the italicized stanza. Nice job. |
| Rono 2006-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI really liked how you used the stanza at the beginning and the end. I just love everything in this one..hmm..I think this one is a favorite! |