um i don't know where love goes some times i feel that when stuff like this happens and you fall in love it is stonger cause you don't want to let it go

Very well written and relatable. Kind of a social-philosophy of how ones past relationships specifically effect their future ones. Good work.

I think the stanzas make a big difference to this one. Three lines is good and it helps the flow a lot. Lots of emotion here.

Like words of wisdom, your very true. I like your stuff its all very real.

~Kevin

This is me perfectly! I used to be this way and honestly I am afraid I still am. This is like the story of my life. Really good job, this is really easy to relate to. Keep up the good work.

Wow, this is stunning. Powerfully written. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

omg, this is REALLY good! really! write more! ~Liz

Ps. Im bored.