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Freed by Mercy 2006-07-05 ch 1,	abuseI write song lyrics also. The last line in your chorus seems weak, also I think if the last word rhymed with "alone" there would be more of a feeling of resolution and satisfaction to the song. I like your bridge "Fear not..."I also suggest "He is the one who 'warms' the cold" Also the line before,'saves' instead of "will save"This is the only verse which rhymes,which seems a bit strange. chorus again: wouldn't "watching and waiting" work better for you in terms of flow (syllable count)? I like this piece because I can understand your point of view and what you're saying. Song lyrics shouldn't be as oblique as poetry, though imagery and metaphor are always important to use.
somewhat-quaint 2006-07-02 ch 1,	abuseWow. I like it. I've been wavering a bit on my christian path, and had a lot of things to worry about, but this has really reminded me of the importance of following and trusting God through it all.
Princess-anna57 2006-07-01 ch 1,	abuseI heart this. Wonderful! Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^