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| LoSt ReMeDy 2007-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseHi! After this I was upset but in a good way as in it touched my heart kind of thing so please keep writing poems! Keep Smiling LoSt ReMeDy |
| Alpha de la Omega 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is well written. The last stanza though has a typo. "And keeps reminds me of the moment..." Did you mean "keeps reminding me..." I get the impression this could also be (if it wasn't) a poem about suicide. Good job. |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI love how this one is written. You're a great writer d:) Keep it up! |
| BahamutsTear 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. Such passion in your words, someday I hope to write as expressive as yourself. Thank you for your review of my simple poem. I would like for you to read Life is Like the Seasons-one of my poems. It might inspire you further then you already are. You seem like a very interesting girl and well educated. 1,200 poems now that's amazing must have taken you a while. Anyways I shall read some more of your stories when I have time. Ja ne. |
| heartless.confessions 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseOh my, I LOVE this poem! I actually got shivers while reading it! All I can say is; keep up the amazing work!! |
| Quitisential Bee 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing stuff. Very raw, not repetative, and understandable. A fav. |
| MistyRose14 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abusei don't typically get very close to crying when i read something, but now i'm almost there... this poem was so beautifully written - i must dig through more of your work! |
| Ryuuka 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is really a nice poem you have here. It's beautiful. I got teary reading it. Nice work. ♥ Ryuuka |
| Bernie-V 2007-02-15 ch 1, | abusethere's only one word for this "wow!" i can really connect with this keep it up =) P.S. Tnx a million for the review Tc and cya bernie |
| Technical-Difficulties 2007-01-31 ch 1, | abusei like it.it even got me in all my laziness to read all of it instead of just going 'lolz wall of text lolz' |
| Atenea217 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is really beautiful!-- i love it.. Have a nice day! Andrea B. |
| Fading Memories 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI'm going through some of your stuff, and I love it! This poem's amazing, and they all have such deep feeling. Great writing! |
| Chino Raven Star 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abusei really liked this poem...it wasn't really until i rad that you was referring to your mother that really made this poem something...it was touching |
| EcoliandDahChihuahua 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseA very good poem. I enjoyed reading this! -The elder twin of Stars of Draco- |
| the shadow in the mirror 2006-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought I was logged in... Oh well. It's a really elegant poem, with some really awesome thoughts and descriptions. I thought I had read some of your poems before, but I must have gotten you and someone else’s names mixed up. You have a very definite style. For some odd reason my concentration broke twice, it is possible that that is because I was ill, and have only just started to feel better. keep it up. cheers. |