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Reminising Obsession
2008-06-04
ch 4,
abuseRise?I love the name!I have no idea why though.But i guess its because i like weird names like that.They sound...pretty to me...-__-.Im weird like that!Anyway lovin it so far!
Saranya
2008-05-10
ch 18, anon.
abuseYou so should have ended this chapter with "I was Death."
Bleeding White Lily
2008-03-24
ch 24,
abuseI'm confused, so she forgives him? They love each other? @.@ Well, it was still cool either way. I liked this ending all the same. Didn't. . . like, depress me. I'm not sure if my poor little heart could take another sad ending but I love your writings style SO much! XD So cudos to you!

Much love!
Bleeding White Lily
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseI think eye liner on a guy is HAWT! A lot of actors and singers do it! XD Guys can have very pretty eyes too! XD I don't think it's girly in the least. Maybe a bit dark though. Most guys who wear eye liner are either dark or emo wanna-be's. Lol interesting story! On to the next chapter! XD
Boo
2008-02-17
ch 24, anon.
abusewow,wow,wow,wow,wow! the ending is the best here. and I seriously hope Fally gives him another chance=))
Great job!
luv me like no other
2007-10-13
ch 24,
abuseomg, u have the most amazing plots ever. this was a wonderful story. the plot line was so disturbing but good.
fat chipmunk
2007-09-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseinteresting first chapter...i like how it's in the guy's pov.

everyone keeps posting fic-a-thon stories. what is this fic-a-thon site and how can i get to it? when i google it, bad things happen...
xXReader.Desu.YoXx
2007-07-26
ch 24,
abuseThat was the creepiest story ever. I can just imagine the faceless ..people D:
or something...

It is 1:04 a.m. and i have finally finish reading the story- E,may,zing!
The end though...at least its sorta a happy ending.. What am i talking about! It is!
I like Rise character, well before he got all physcotic on killing and stuff...Uh yah.
I suspected the world would be just...completely empty && *Lifeless* ...sorta like the time when Rise [re]met Julian and everything was gone.


Love this story! It was creative and unpredictable ;]
personwithaccount
2007-07-17
ch 24,
abusei finished reading this story months ago but i never reviewed [sorry, didn't have my account] but i loved the ending! im a sorta twisted, "oh my god Rise has gone crazy, hasn't he?" sort of way.

the lemon pie was cute ;)
Wind's Whisper
2007-07-13
ch 24,
abuseWow this was intense. i mean, just, WOW.

I read it all in one sitting, too. Just about killed me. (pun not intended).

Excellent writing. I'm off to check out your other stuff now!

xx
SparklingStar25
2007-06-24
ch 24,
abuseOK.That was unexpected.But really,I wasn't expecting anything negative like end of the world or the death of Rise and Fally..but not this either.I was just ...I don't know.But this was really really good and I was wondering if there is a sequel??
Lilly
2007-06-07
ch 24, anon.
abuseWOW! what a great story! I loved every piece of it, youre absolutely brilliant! you have SUCH cool ideas for fics, I adore you :]
super happy nuclear girl
2007-05-26
ch 24,
abuseShit, I have to say, where the hell do you come up with these stories? They're mental. In a good way. A very good way.

This was AMAZING.

I don't know what to say. Except, as usual, you amaze me.

God sakes! I loved this.
stardust
2007-03-29
ch 1, anon.
abusethat, in my opinion, was the perfect ending. loved it.
Hotkitty
2007-03-27
ch 24,
abusei i i i think im here. i think im (finalli) here. IS THIS NOT LOVE I ASK YOU? is it not. -moment of perpetual deepness- & now im going to buckle up, kinda like this

-buckles up-

and im gonna get readi. kinda like this

-gets readi-

& im gonna start reading. kinda like... kinda like (yes you've guessed it) THIS

-starts reading-

'cause its the last review i wont do an anal -GUFFGIGGLE- (that means analysing, btw. i rescue your head from the gutter. and shall i demonstrate that. shall i shall i shall i shall I) review 'cause it's the last chapter. so i'll give a brief seriousness. ohk. ohkie dohkes. i read on.

omfg HAHA. that was such an awesome ending. it was like... so rise-like. & so, i dunno. all heated and intense and then suddenli it all dissipates, just like that, but in a good way. i likied it. & that had to be the first time you've ever written a good ending. well... apart from resistance but then this ending was happier than that one -pines over chase- so yeah. heartheart. i kant find my outlines -depression- so im off to go tear apart my room now. & i'll catch up on all the other stuff during my holiday. god, im so effing be-hind on everything. but yeah. i liked the whole way fally was all, "you just dont, OHK?" & then the way that you said that nature would do it on its own. that was hawt. like, it was such a simple alternative thing for a system that was pretti complex. & it worked to. so yay. onli... how come rise & fally lost their life/deathness. or did you mention that and i'm just dumb...
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