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| Butterfly Disguise 2006-08-30 ch 1,  | abuseOk I had to go back and reread "hearts made of glass, hearts made of stone/we walk the same path but we walk it alone" because it just stuck out to me. So you have an awesome ability to write amazing poetry... I'd like to see you try a different form of poetry. Like a different rhyming scheme and such. You made a clear point and got it across perfectly by using the right words. I love this. Keep on writing. |