Very sad poem. I can feel you put a lot of emotion in it, it comes through so clearly.

O wow. Idk what situation you wrote this for, but this fits my situation exactly! I loved it, really I did. awsome poem.

When I read this poem, I thought, "Where are the specifics?" I dunno. It's probably just me, I'm not a writer, but after I read it I wondered what the hell the speaker was talking about.

On a scale from 1 to 10, I would say 5. So...details, details! ^_^

--Maggie