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| HelloLovely 2008-10-12 ch 1,  | abuseHey I just want to say, you've written a story with a good first line. :] Love, Becca |
| HelloLovely 2008-10-12 ch 24, | abuseIt was definitely a great story, and from the beginning I had a sense that Monica had died in some way. I like the ending where Regan comes to terms with him loving Monica, it shows how much she's grown. I literally almost started crying last chapter when she thought it was over, when he came to her grandparents' house. I liked his speech, a lot. it was just right, not too sappy, but not cold, either. Love, Becca |
| HelloLovely 2008-10-12 ch 16, | abuseWhen we talk about all my old drama, You look at me and wonder how I'm not insane. - Still Dreaming by Silverstein. Definitely reminds me of Grant and what Regan says in this chapter. Love, Becca |
| HelloLovely 2008-10-10 ch 13, | abuseWhen is the exact date of Regan's birthday? And my mom is a cardiothoracic nurse practitioner! I just thought that was cool and felt like sharing. :] Love the story, I can't wait to find out more about Monica! Love, Becca |
| Lilith Rei 2008-10-09 ch 1, | abuseThis story was wonderful, I enjoyed every chapter of it. Great job :D |
| sketchingaCYNiC 2008-09-29 ch 24, | abusebeautiful. i loved it :] great english too (no grammar mistakes), which made me smile a lot. |
| pretitiful 2008-09-26 ch 9, | abusebrady is cute as well. “Good. Y’all could make some fuckin’ hot babies, man…uh, girl,” he amended clumsily to me haha. |
| pretitiful 2008-09-26 ch 8, | abuseaww! that 20 questions was so sweet. aww. regan? yeah? can i kiss you?? ahh. that was so sweet. :) |
| pretitiful 2008-09-26 ch 7, | abuseaww. grant is so sweet. and funny “Oh, just you.” He put on a falsetto voice. “’Don’t smoke, don’t drink, nah nah nah, dipshit, yadda yadda, blah blah.” haha. funny. yadda. blah. :) |
| pretitiful 2008-09-26 ch 6, | abuseaww, tyler and regan. are so cute. always arguing. lol. |
| pretitiful 2008-09-26 ch 5, | abusei found the spider incident really amusing especially the way Grant reacted. :) |
| HelloLonely 2008-09-22 ch 24, | abuseAh, such a lovely story! The plot itself was enough to intrigue me, and my goodness the use of wit and humor made it all the more enjoyable. Everything was played out just right, and the happenings around and in the white mansion was ...endearing, I guess you could say. It was so sad when Tyler told Regan about how everyone was moving out, almost made me bawl. But everything worked out in the end, and I'm off to the sequel. :) |
| pretitiful 2008-09-22 ch 2, | abuseGo dump ice down your pants; you’re a disgrace to mankind. haha. funny. like tyler and the story so far :) |
| Queen-Of-Blood 2008-09-16 ch 24, | abuseYou are epic. I've completely lost track of how many times this story made me laugh, but of my gosh, I loved it to pieces. The characters were awesome, and i really just loved every aspect of this story. |
| MamiPapi 2008-09-15 ch 13, | abuseExcellent story so far, definitely going onto fav list. just a little thing to note:Osmosis is the net movement of water through a selective permeable membrane from a region of low solute potential to a region of high solute potential. It's actually from HIGH to LOW potential. I'm a chemist and very anal about thingys like this. But it really doesn't matter heh. |